Persuasive Writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

Brushing Teeth

Teeth are important because they help us
chew our food in our mouth and you need
to look after them.

So I think we should brush our teeth
every day and every night.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth
every day and every night so that we can have
nice smelling teeth.

By brushing our teeth we are cleaning out the
leftover food between our teeth.
When we brush our teeth it’s nice and clean and not smelly.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth
so that the bacteria does not eat our teeth.
When you brush your teeth you brush
the bacteria out of your teeth.
If we don’t brush our teeth
the bacteria comes in and eats our teeth
and we will get a hole in our teeth.  

Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth
every day and every night.
When you eat food some food is stuck
between your teeth and that’s
why it is so important to brush your teeth
every day and every night.

Brushing our teeth is really good.     

So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth
every day and every night.