I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
Going to my Nana Kim’s house and my cousins birthday
On the weekend I went to my Nana Kim’s after school.
First I had a shower. Angel had a shower.
Next me and Angel packed our suitcase then we got dressed into our clothes.
I was really excited to go to my Nana Kim’s house.
After me and Angel got dressed me, my nana, and Angel,
and my little baby sister went to Whangarei. Me and Angel were asleep.
We were almost there. I was so excited to go to my Nana Kim’s house.
When we got there I gave her a hug then we watched some movies.
Later on we went to the park me and Angel went on the swing
and the monkey bars. We went on all kinds of rides.
After the park we went to the ice cream shop and
I got a chocolate ice cream and Angel got a Vanilla ice cream.
Then we went to McDonalds and I got a double cheeseburger
and a happy meal but I didn’t get a cheeseburger
because I got a double cheeseburger.
For my drink I got a frozen raspberry and mango and a white choc top ice cream.
Angel got a lime and blueberry and my Nana Kim got a happy meal and then we went home. When we got home my Aunty Tina and her son
Javis arrived. I asked my nana Kim if I could go on her phone and she said yes.
Then I asked her if I could downlowd tik tok and she said yes.
I played heaps of tik tok’s and I did tik toks with Angel and my cousin.
Later on we went for a swim at the Whangarai pools.
I had a long swim because I was excited to go to the Whangarai pools.
It was fun but when it was night we had my cousin’s birthday.
We had karaoke. We had limbo and we had a feed.
There were heaps of treats. They were so yummy.
They had lollies, chocolate, chips. The lollies were yummy.
The chocolate was yum as well the chips were so yum.
I liked my cousin’s birthday. The next day we watched movies.
We were waiting for my step dad to come.
Later on my step dad came to pick us up and
then we went home to my mum. I had a wonderful weekend.
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